The second story in my Remember WENN Fairy Tale Series is based after the classic Hans Christian Anderson story and was inspired by the second season episode "Behind Every Great Woman." You'll want to check out that on YouTube in order for a lot of this story to make any sense:
Behind Every Great Woman
Like Snow White, this is another fairy tale I didn't mind re-writing. As romantic as Hans Christian Anderson's version of The Little Mermaid is, I'm not the biggest fan of tragic endings. Trouble is, the ending of the Disney movie always seemed like a bit of a cop-out, too. The question is how to give this mermaid what she really deserves...while staying true to the story without getting too sappy?
Over at radio station WENN, writer Betty Roberts has been filling in for Hilary Booth on a musical show. That worked as a one-time stunt....but now everyone thinks it's Hilary who has a golden voice. Even station manager Scott Sherwood is giving Hilary the plush treatment and ignoring Betty's contributions. Betty's fed up with being ignored and treated like a stand-in. She just wants Scott and Hilary to appreciate her. When Hilary suggests The Little Mermaid for a radio broadcast, Betty finds herself relating to the heroine more than she could ever imagine....
Monday, August 31, 2015
The Little Mer-Betty, Prologue
A WENN Fairy Tale: The Little
Mer-Betty
Rating: PG (mild violence, innuendo)
Pairings: Betty/Scott, some Hilary/Jeff
Disclaimer: The characters always
belong to Rupert Holmes. The show would belong to American Movie
Classics if they'd acknowledge its existence. The original “The
Little Mermaid” belongs to the estate of Hans Christian Anderson.
Prologue and epilogue are set during
the second season episode “Behind Every Great Woman.”
Betty rushed into the writer's room,
blushing. She couldn't believe she'd frozen up like she did, in front
of Ruth Getty, no less! And after doing all that singing for Hilary
in the past few days. I'll bet Hilary was never really a singer at
all, Betty thought in annoyance. She probably had a
non-singing role in that one musical she starred in.
Although she and
Ruth Getty had been able to perform after she'd closed her eyes and
had a drink of water, it was hardly one of her great moments. And
what's worse, for once, the whole show had been her hairbrained
scheme, rather than Scott's. And what got into him? Was he really so
desperate for ratings – and so entranced by a pair of witchy divas
– that he practically shoved her into something that was morally
wrong? Sometimes, I wonder what I see in him.
She watched Scott
and Hilary walk Ruth Getty to the elevator out of the corner of her
eye. They were laughing, arm in arm. He'd do anything to get
sponsors, she thought, almost bitter. Then she shook her head. He
was only doing what was necessary to keep the station afloat.
Betty rolled in a
new piece of paper. She had dozens of scripts to work on, starting
with tomorrow night's “Land of Make Believe” episode. Hilary had
brought the Hans Christian Anderson story “The Little Mermaid” to
her attention. She'd heard of it, but hadn't often read it. She
preferred happy endings. Hilary, on the other hand, thought the show
could use a good, tragic story...one that would, of course, show off
both her new-found singing ability and her dramatic skills.
Betty had to admit,
once she re-read the story, that Hilary had a point. It was one of
Anderson's most romantic and beautiful stories. Mr. Foley could have
a field day creating aquatic sound effects. Mackie could be King
Neptune, Hilary the mermaid and the witch, Maple the prince's other
suitor and the mermaid's sister, and Jeff the prince. If she offered
to spell Gertie at the switchboard for a few hours, she might even be
able to convince her to play the mermaid's grandmother.
Betty sighed as she
studied the Anderson fairy tale collection on her desk. Why did that
poor mermaid have to suffer so, for a prince who didn't even
appreciate her? She didn't deserve to become seafoam or a spirit in
the end. All she did was fall in love with the wrong man. And what
about the witch? Her character was awfully murky. She'd have to do
some work to flesh her out and figure out her motivation besides just
giving the mermaid a potion.
I wish Scott appreciated me. I come
up with ideas, I work and type and push and grapple with the
sponsors, and does he notice? Half the time, he claims it was his
idea! And Hilary treats me like a servant. I might as well not have a
voice. Scott and Hilary never hear it.
She started typing,
but in truth, her mind was a million miles away....
The Little Mer-Betty, Part 1
Nantucket Sound,
Just off Nantucket Island, Massachusetts, late August 1906
Beneath the rolling waves of the Atlantic Ocean lay a whole world
that no human had ever seen. Fish knew this world, fleeing here the
moment they escaped a human's net. Whales knew it, too. Even sharks
were welcome, if they kept their feeding frenzy to a minimum. It was
a world where sea quartz glittered, rocks glowed softly, seaweed
drifted lazily, and flowers blossomed in brilliant hues that could
never be possible on land.
It was the world of the merfolk. They were spectral beings,
half-fish, half-mammal, who lived in grand cities deep beneath the
waves. They were the protectors of the sea, keeping watch over its
fish and other animals, and making sure its plants and reefs were
well-cared for.
Most of the creatures who lived under the Nantucket Sound were
content with their life. There were new schools of fish to count,
whales to race, nets cast by fishermen to dodge, and rock formations
and ancient wrecks to explore. One mermaid, however, felt
differently. She'd always been fascinated by the world above her.
“Tell me about the humans, Grandmother Gertrude,” Betty asked yet
again, pulling her reddish-gold tail up by her beloved relative.
Betty, the eldest daughter of King MacKinley (or Mackie, if you
preferred), was also considered to be one of the loveliest mermaids
in the Mid-Atlantic. Her tail glowed with burnished red scales. Her
deep brown eyes and soft pink cheeks were framed by masses of flowing
chestnut curls. She wore flowers around her pale breast and stomach,
like all young mermaids.
Gertrude laughed, pushing the mermaid's hair back from her eyes with
a delicate pink flower. “I've already told you what I know a
hundred times, my little Betty.”
“Tell me again, Grandmother. I do love to hear about them.”
Her grandmother sighed. She couldn't understand her granddaughter's
obsession with the land-dwellers. It was...unseemly...for a mermaid.
“All right. Humans don't have fins like we do, nor can they breathe
in the water for long. They travel on things called legs, riding
strange four-legged whales they call horses, or riding in very large
floating pieces of driftwood called ships. Their homes are made from
driftwood rather than rock or glass, and are usually smaller than our
grand cities. Their legs move on green plants called grass. It's a
bit like seaweed, but it doesn't move about as much. They sink their
toes into soft golden sand, and watch fish that sing amid tall,
waving plants called trees.”
Betty picked another flower from below her rock and twirled it around
in her fingers. “They have flowers that smell beautiful, and whirl
around and make motions called 'dancing.' Oh, how I wish I could
dance!” She playfully grabbed her grandmother's arms and whirled
her around and around in the water.
“Betty!” Gertrude couldn't help her laughter. “Enough! This old
tail isn't up for such spinning around. You're making me feel like a
whirlpool.”
Betty gave her grandmother a kiss on the cheek. “Oh please,
Grandmother Gertrude. You're not that old. You're only 369.”
“370 last birthday.” Gertrude settled back down on the rock. “And
speaking of birthdays, I know someone....”
“Oh, yes!” Betty grinned. “Let's go see Father. I can't wait
for my surprise. Is it a new fish spike quill for writing stories? Or
a book taken from one of the wrecks? Or a dolphin to sing with me?
Or....”
Gertie laughed. “My goodness, child! Why don't we move along to the
main hall and find out?”
The main hall was where the King and his family met for all royal
events, from concerts to birthday parties. Unlike her older brother
Jeffrey, who loved parties and being the center of attention, Betty
had asked for a small family party. She'd rather be with her father
and grandmother and brothers and sister than all the merfolk and fish
and whales in the Kingdom of Nantucket Sound.
“Surprise!” Betty gasped with delight when she entered the main
hall. It had been decorated with garlands of the brilliant flowers
she so loved. Glittering gems lit ever crevice. Her favorite foods –
clams, sea lettuces, and lobster – had been set out.
Best of all, her whole family was there. “Happy birthday, my little
angel fish.” Her father Mackie gave her a kiss. Despite his small
stature and graying hair and mustache, he was the defacto King of the
Atlantic, and much-loved among his family and his subjects for his
fair judgment and laid-back nature.
“Yeah, sis,” added Jeff, his flowing deep-brown curls framing his
chiseled features. “I wanted to give you the first present.” He
handed her a seashell. It opened to reveal a sharp quill and a green
glass bottle.
“A new fish-scale pen and never-run squid ink!” She hugged her
brother. “Thank you, Jeff! I'm almost out of ink.”
“What about us?” She laughed as Christopher and Douglas, her two
younger brothers, jostled for position. Doug was plump and
sweet-looking, with wide, gentle eyes and their father's laid-back
manner. His dark gold hair flowed around his broad shoulders and
chest.
“Doug, let me give it to her!” Christopher, or C.J as his family
called him, took the seashell. He was the family fixer who always
knew how everything ran...and how to put it back together when it was
broken. He had long, straight chestnut hair that framed dour, dark
eyes and was more slender, like Jeff. He held the seashell out to
Betty. “Here you go, big sister.”
The seashell opened through a series of quartz hinges to finally
reveal a large oyster pearl on a golden necklace. “I found the
pearl when I was helping the food collectors pick up oysters the
other day,” C.J explained. “It was so pretty, I thought it would
look great on you.”
“I found the necklace by one of the wrecks,” Doug added. “Here,
let me put it on you.” He undid the clasp and hung it around his
sister's slender neck. “You look so beautiful, Betty. I wish Mom
could have seen you.”
“So do I.” Mackie squeezed her hand. “She would have been proud
of you. You're such a smart mergirl, and one of the best writers
under the Atlantic.”
“Oh, please allow me to give my gift next!” Betty giggled as her
youngest sibling hurried over. Enid was small and plump, with a
pearly pale blue tail, sweet guileless blue eyes, and masses of
golden curls that no amount of working through with pearl combs
could untangle. Her gold-rimmed spectacles perched on the end of of
her button nose. She always seemed to be out of breath, rushing to
study with her sister here, helping her father with his work there.
“Here you go! I only just completed this story yesterday. It's
fortuitous that I was able to finish it. It's a story about the
people above the waters of the Atlantic. I know you truly enjoy
Grandmother's tales.”
She smiled and took the bound sheets of seaweed-paper, specially
treated to be waterproof. “Thank you, Enid. I'll start reading it
tonight.”
Gertrude took the largest seashell from the table. “I've been
wanting to give you this for a long time. I think you're old enough
to take care of it now.”
When the seashell flipped open, it revealed the most amazing tiara
Betty had ever seen. It was made from hundreds of pieces of quartz,
in all shapes and sizes. A pearl the size of her father's thick fist
was embedded in the center.
“It's beautiful, Grandmother.” Betty was truly amazed. “I've
never seen anything like it.”
“It was your mother's on her birthday. Now it's yours.” She took
the tiara and nestled it in her granddaughter's thick chestnut curls.
“You look so much like her, Betty. She was beautiful, too, and a
writer.”
Mackie smiled. “I know what present my angelfish wants most of
all.”
“Oh yes!” Betty beamed. “Today is my day to go above!”
“That's right, my sweet little tuna. It's finally that birthday.
The one where you get to spend the day taking a gander at the
land-dwellers and seein' what they do.”
“I don't know why you'd want to.” Jeff frowned. “I don't trust
humans. You know what happened when I went up there. I got caught in
a fisherman's net.” He waved a hand at his chocolate-brown fin,
which was missing a piece. “I'm lucky I got out with only a chunk
of my tail missing.”
“Most humans aren't hunters. They have families and children and
favorite animal companions, just like we do.” Doug took his
sister's hand. “I went closer to land when I visited. I saw human
women in strange, gauzy, flowing scales, splashing each other in the
sea or playing with their children in the sand. The little humans
were so sweet! They built tiny castles and scooped sand into
bowl-like objects. I don't think any of them would have hurt a
minnow.”
“You're terribly lucky!” Enid took her hands. “How I wish I
could attend with you!”
“Me too,” C.J added. “I want to see if the humans have any
shell machines like ours.”
Betty thanked all of them for the presents and gave them huge hugs.
“Wish me luck!”
“Be back by sundown!” Gertrude called out. “And mind your
manners when you're up there. Don't want the humans to get the wrong
idea about us merfolk.”
Betty finally made her way to the surface. She'd been close to the
surface before, but had never broken the ripples that flowed gently
over her home. Now, for the first time, she was going to see the
humans for herself. She was hoping she'd meet more of the females and
children, like Doug did. They sounded like fun. And if she
encountered a fisherman's net...well, she knew how to take care of
herself.
The first thing she saw when her head emerged from the water was a
vast expanse of blue-gray overhead. The world seemed to be nothing
but fat, greyish puffs swimming through the grayness. Grandmother had
told her about the air humans needed to breathe to
survive....although right now, Betty was wondering how they could.
The air around her was so heavy, she suspected she could cut it with
a sharp piece of quartz.
That was when she saw the strangest thing bobbing along in the waves.
It seemed to be made all of gaily colored driftwood. The tall
floating driftwood glided past her, seemingly swimming on the crests
of the waves. Betty had heard about it from her grandmother's
stories, but had never actually seen anything like it in one piece.
She'd seen wrecked boats on the ocean floor, but none in good
condition.
She swam over to the vessel and climbed the rock-like chains to the
anchor as well as she could. She held onto the railings and watched
the party. The humans moved lightly around the deck, one of them
playing a stringed object that made music. They stomped their legs
and twirled and sang and made tons of noise.
“Hey Scotty!” laughed one burly fellow with lots of hair on his
chin, “this is the only way to celebrate the end of the summer,
ain't it?”
That was when she saw him. He wasn't as tall as some of the men
around him, nor was he as broad-shouldered, but he had a strong chin,
heavy black hair with silver at the temples, and beautiful warm amber
eyes. His lopsided smile turned her heart to soft sand. She could
hear his infectious and merry laughter across the main deck. “You
bet it is,” he grinned, “and you guys deserve it. You've worked
hard. This shipment of spices from India will net us thousands of
dollars.”
“And better yet,” added another one with thick eyebrows and a
hearty, ringing voice, “we'll be home in time for the big Labor Day
parade and clambake in three weeks!”
“You think I'd make you boys miss the clambake?” Scott laughed,
whirling with another, smaller man. “It's one of my favorite
parties of the year!”
“Who are ye takin' with ye this year, Scott?” The big man with
the bristly chin nudged him playfully...though he nearly sent the
younger man to the deck.
“Haven't figured that one out yet, Harry,” Scott admitted when
Harry helped him to his feet. “I'll find a girl. Piece of cake!”
Betty sighed. She wished she could eat clams with him. Or do anything
with him. He was so strong and handsome. If only he were a merman,
not a human! She wished she could sing for him, read to him, take him
to meet her family....
She was so busy admiring the good-natured sailor, she hadn't noticed
that the dark clouds on the horizon had become even heavier, and the
thick air even closer. She was startled by a noisy rumble that shook
the boat to its core. Bright, white lights, like the lights from
electric eels, flashed across the sky.
Harry looked up into the horizon. “We'd better batten down the
hatches, Scotty. There's a storm-a brewin'.”
“And it looks like it's going to be a nasty one.” Scott
immediately started giving orders to the men. Everyone dashed around
at once, throwing on strange, slick yellow coverings and tying down
things on-deck. Betty barely clung to the railings. She kept her eyes
on Scott as he tied down the long piece of driftwood that held the
wide white fins. The rain had started coming down now, lashing on the
boat in torrents. The air picked up until it was a gale, blowing
barrels, small objects, and men across the deck.
The wind was too much for Betty. She wasn't accustomed to such force!
She finally lost her grip and plunged back into the sea. She swam
away from the vessel, trying to avoid being caught in its currents.
She made it to the surface again, this time watching the ship from a
distance. The ship wasn't handling the storm well. It was being
tossed around like her brothers' childhood shell boat toys. She
gasped as a bolt of light hit the mast, setting it on fire. Scott was
struggling with a circle with spikes on it to keep the boat in
control. Without the mast and fins, the boat was easily thrown into
series of jutting rocks by the shore with a sickening crunch!
Most of the men had climbed into a smaller version of the boat, one
without a mast. Betty swam as close to it as she dared. She saw Harry
and some of the other men, but not Scott. The other men were
concerned, too. She could hear their chatter over the booming noise
from the sky. Oh, where was he?
The men had just gotten the smaller boat away from the larger one
when the larger boat began to break apart. No! Betty had to go
to the boat and make sure Scott was all right. Grandmother Gertrude
told her that humans couldn't survive for very long in the water
without special equipment. Their lungs weren't made for being without
air for more than a minute or two at most.
She swam around the part of the boat that was now in the ocean,
dodging debris and scraps of driftwood. She finally found Scott
trapped under the mast that had been flung into the sea. He was
struggling to get loose, but he couldn't hold his breath and push it
away at the same time. His furious struggles lessened, until he
finally fell unconscious, his body becoming lifeless under the heavy
cylinder of wood.
Betty had no time to think. She used another piece of the mast to
push the log off Scott as well as she could. She then pulled him to
the surface as quickly as her fins could carry them. The storm was
already passing as she dragged him to the shore.
By the time she made it to the nearest piece of land, the storm was
gone. A beautiful streak of red, gold, lavender, and pale blue had
replaced it. Rays of gold broke through the gray clouds, illuminating
the duo on the shore. Betty held Scott against her tail, singing
sweetly to him. Her reddish curls flowed around both of them. He was
so beautiful, with his thick, dark hair streaked with silver, strong
chin, and muscular arms and chest. He was still breathing a little
ragged, probably due to his sudden immersion.
“Oh Scott, I wish I could stay with you for always.” She gave him
a kiss on the lips, the way she remembered seeing her father and
mother do many years ago, when she was but a tiny mergirl of 50.
Scott's eyelashes were just fluttering when Betty heard a happy bray
of a female voice. “Scotty!” She dove into the surf just as a
tall, bosomy red-head in a fancy flowered covering and knitted wrap
rushed onto the beach. “You're all right!” She knelt beside him
and gave him a huge hug.
He was coughing up water. “Yeah, I am, but I won't be if you don't
give me some air, Mapes.”
The young woman slapped him on the back as he leaned over. “That
must have been some ride you had. Your crew got back here about a
half-hour ago. They're all fine, but they're worried about you.”
Scott looked at her with a dazed smile. “Maple...did you rescue me?
Was that you singing?”
Maple raised an eyebrow. “Scotty, I just got out here. I haven't
sung a note. That must have been a seagull you heard.”
“No, it wasn't a seagull.” Scott looked around him, as if trying
to find the source of the unknown singer. “It was beautiful. Maple,
it was the most amazing music I ever heard. It was like...like a
mermaid's voice.” The young woman slowly helped him to his feet.
“I've gotta find her. I know someone helped me when I was stuck
under the mast on the ship. I remember seeing a face....a very pretty
face...coming towards me when I was under water.” He sighed. “And
then, I blacked out. That's all I remember, until I heard that
voice.”
“You musta hit your head on the deck when you went down.” She put
an arm around him to steady him. “Come on. Eugenia's got corn
bread, baked beans, mashed turnips, and fresh peas on the table for
dinner. We were gonna celebrate you comin' home with your cargo.”
She gave him a big, toothy smile. “We can still celebrate you
livin' through that storm.”
Betty watched Maple help Scott up towards the strange shapes on the
shore. She felt so discouraged. “He doesn't remember me!” she
exclaimed. “He doesn't know I was the one who saved him.” She
fingered her necklace. “I have to be with him. I have to tell him
somehow.”
She dove back into the water. She was already late getting home. Her
father would be furious, and her siblings and grandmother would
worry. Especially Jeff. He and his wife Hilary, a noted sea witch,
were convinced that humans were no good. They considered merfolk,
with their ability to swim like fish and breathe in the air as well
as in the water, to be vastly superior. Merfolk only took the fish
and crustaceans they needed to feed their families and keep
populations down, no more. Humans caught and caught until there was
nothing left to catch, then moved on to the next patch of ocean to
strip that of life.
That can't be true of Scott, Betty thought. He didn't
mention catching fish. I saw no nets on his ship. He catches
something called spices. I'll bet he's never harmed a fish in his
life, except for to have one or two for dinner.
“Princess Elizabeth Ariel Marina Pearl, where in the name of
Neptune have you been?” Her father's normally gentle voice shouted
with anger when she finally arrived back in their family grotto. “You
should have been home hours ago!”
“Father, you won't believe this!” She took his hands. “I saw
the most amazing things on the surface! A ship passed by me, and
there was a huge storm, and I actually saved a human's life!”
“You...what?” Mackie frowned. “Betty, you know we're not
supposed to make contact with humans. If they were aware that we're
down here, they'd fish us and catch us and push us out of our homes
until there's nothing left. Remember what happened to most of the
whales around here?”
Betty was too excited to heed his anger. “Father, he was knocked
out in the storm. He would have died if I hadn't gotten him to shore.
He didn't really see me.” She sighed. “He was the most beautiful
creature! He had hair the color of a black pearl, and eyes like
ancient amber, and his skin was so...”
Her father interrupted her. “And he has legs.” Mackie patted his
daughter's shoulder. “Hon, you'll be better off if you just forget
about him. He's a human. You're a mermaid. You can't live in his
world, and he can't live in yours.”
“But I...”
“Honey, just go to bed. This will all pass in the morning.”
She did go to bed....but it didn't pass. She thought about Scott and
the world above constantly. She wondered what it would be to have
legs, like Scott's friend Maple. She'd dance with him, and sing for
him, and be by his side, and write stories for him and other humans
to read. She wished she could tell him who rescued him. She was so
caught up in her daydreams, she barely left her room in the grotto.
“Betty?” Gertrude peered into the opening to her room about a
week after her birthday. “Are you all right, hon? Everyone's been
asking for you. We've barely seen you for days.”
Betty turned from her stories. “Grandmother,” she started, “can
humans breathe underwater? Isn't there any way for them to live down
here?”
“No, my child.” Gertrude shook her head. “I've told you before.
Humans aren't equipped for living here. Their lungs can only breathe
in air, and even the most adept swimmer can't move among fish and
aquatic plant life like we can.”
“Couldn't we live among them? Live like they do?”
Gertrude sighed. “It just isn't possible. Humans don't live nearly
as long as we do, only 70 years or so at the most, maybe 80. When
they die, their souls become immortal. Our souls are different. We
live longer, but our souls don't. When we die, we become one with the
water...but we don't live on.” She nodded at Betty's tail.
“Besides, we can't walk on land any more than then can swim under
the waves.”
“How can I get an immortal soul?”
Getrude frowned. “Betty, does this have anything to do with that
sailor your father said you rescued from drowning?”
Betty played with her pearl necklace. “Partly.” She turned to her
books. “But it mostly has to do with me. I liked what I saw of the
land, Grandmother. I love my home here...but I want to explore there,
too. I want to see it all, write about it all.”
Gertrude shook her head. “You have a whole world to explore down
here. Be glad of that.” She hugged her granddaughter. “Things
will be back to normal tomorrow.”
“No, Grandmother,” Betty whispered to herself as she watched her
beloved grandparent head for her own room. “I don't think things
will ever be normal again.”
The Little Mer-Betty, Part 2
Betty knew what she had to do. She put her tiara on her book, then
swam out of the palace, to her brother Jeff's smaller grotto.
Her brother was married to Hilary Booth. She had once been one of the
finest performers in the Atlantic Ocean...and one of the most
notorious sea witches, offering her potions for a price. When her
popularity among merfolk faded, she turned to her other profession.
Though she did love her husband Prince Jeffrey, she still spent most
of her time in her grotto, trying to find ways to return to the
legitimate stage.
“Jeff!” She was thankful her brother was at home, reading and
listening to a fish orchestra near-by practice. “I need to see
Hilary.”
Jeff put his book aside. “Why? What's wrong?”
“I want to become human, and she's the only one who can help me.”
“Betty, are you crazy?” Jeff put his hands on her shoulder.
“You're a mermaid. You belong here, with us. You don't belong up
there. You wouldn't know how to act, how to behave. Besides, you
don't have legs.”
“I have to get up there, Jeff. Hilary knows how. I know she has
potions that can make anyone into anything.”
“Betty, there are plenty of young mermen you can choose from down
here.”
Betty smirked. “You will take me to Hilary, or I'll tell Father
what the two of you were doing in the back of the hall during our
last concert.”
Jeff glared at her. “You wouldn't.”
She crossed her arms. “Try me.”
“All right, all right.” He lead her out of the grotto and towards
the darker part of the ocean. “But if anyone asks, this was all
your idea.”
Betty shivered as she followed Jeff. She knew about the sea witches.
They were discussed in hushed tones by merfolk. Some of the witches
were healers who aided the sick with potions. They were respected and
well-thought of in the Atlantic. Most, though, practiced strange and
frightening black magic. Betty heard the rumors of the worst of them,
who took a creatures heart or mind or hair in exchange for a potion
that could make all their dreams come true...or make their lives a
living hell.
She dodged the waving seaweed that tried to grab at her tail and long
brown locks, passing by eels and strange fish with eyes that were too
large or small for their bodies and spiny fins that would kill
anything that touched them. The grotto was dim and moody, just barely
lit by sparkling rock embedded in the walls.
“Jeffrey?” Hilary looked up as the duo entered the caves. She was
mixing a glowing green liquid and chunks of something pinkish into a
gleaming cauldron. “This is a surprise. I thought you wanted to
spend the night at home.” She raised her eyebrows at his visitor.
“Betty? You're the last person I expected to see. I thought you
disapproved of my...work.”
The younger woman gathered all the courage she could muster. “Hilary,
I need your help.”
“So does everyone, dear.” She dipped her finger into a viscous
purple liquid, then poured it slowly into the cauldron.
“I want to be human.”
Hilary stirred the cauldron slowly. “Why in the name of the seven
seas would you want to be one of those ignorant fish murderers? We
live longer, we have a whole ocean to explore, we can breathe and
move around underwater better, we...”
“Hilary, I'm in love. With a human...and with the land. I have to
get up there somehow. You're the only one I know who'll do it. I want
to have a soul, like humans do.”
“Ahhh.” Hilary went to a large, crumbling old book on a high
shelf in a corner of the grotto. “You made the mistake of falling
for one of those two-legged monstrosities.” She couldn't help her
small smirk. “Is he good-looking...for a human?”
Betty smiled dreamily. “Oh, incredibly so! Good-looking, smart, fun
and kind to his workers.” She sighed. “I do love my family, and
my home. But land...there's so many things on land I want to see, so
much I want to experience. I want to dance and sing and celebrate
among the humans. I want to know what it feels like, well, to have
real feelings.”
“I tried to talk her out of it, Hilary.” Jeff made a face. “I
think she's crazy, but she's bound and determined to do this.”
Hilary put the book on a flat rock. “I can help you, dear...but
there are several conditions. First, I'll require three things from
you.” She worked her fingers through Betty's chestnut curls. “I'll
need your hair and one of your largest scales to make the potion
work.” Her fingers went down to the mermaid's slender white throat.
“Second, I'll need you to trade your most precious possession to
me. Your voice.”
“My voice?” Betty drew back, her eyes wide with surprise.
“Hilary,” Jeff snapped, “can't you ask for something else?”
“I could give you my books, or my stories.” Betty fingered the
pearl on her breast. “Or the necklace that Doug and C.J gave me. Or
the tiara that was Mother's.”
“No, my dear.” She rubbed Betty's throat a little more. “I've
heard you sing. You have a voice like an angel. If I had your voice,
I would be the greatest music star in all the Atlantic, not
sequestering myself away in my grotto, dreaming about impossible
romances.”
“If I can't talk, how can I tell Scott how I feel?”
Hilary smirked. “There are other ways to tell a man you love him
besides words. A mere glance can speak a thousand words. A gesture
can say more than some of the greatest monologues in merfolk
history.” She swam around her husband, grinning like a catfish. Her
hand sprang out to Jeff's tail. He nearly toppled over into the
grotto!
Jeff rubbed the back of his tail. “Hilary, please.” He made a
face. “I enjoy our little games too, but save them for when we get
home and don't have an audience.”
“Hold that thought.” She patted Jeff's cheek, then went to Betty.
“This won't be easy for you, dear. You're giving up not only your
tail and your voice. The moment you stand, you'll feel like you're
walking on sharp knives. Every step will feel like a stab into your
nether limbs. However, you will be able to dance and walk and see
everything you've been dreaming of.”
“Betty, you can't be considering this.” Jeff's large deep-brown
eyes were pleading. “Think of everything you're giving up. We're
your family. It's not on the surface. It's here.”
Hilary nodded. “For once, I agree with Jeffrey. I think you're
insane to want this. You only saw this fellow once.”
The younger mermaid shook her head. “I have to do it, Hilary. I
want to love Scott...and the land. Oh Hilary, he's so worth it.”
She patted her brother's shoulder. “How did you feel when you first
met Jeff? I know you two love each other, even if you fight
sometimes.”
Jeff raised an eyebrow. Their noisy quarrels were legendary in the
grotto. “Sometimes?”
“Like...” Hilary sighed. “Like I'd do anything for him. Of
course, I regretted it the next day, but...”
Jeff glared at her. “Hilary....”
Hilary ignored him and began gathering ingredients from her shelves.
“If you do this, you'll have two weeks to gain his love. He must
come to love you, cherish you, appreciate you. When he does, he'll
declare his love for you, then kiss you. His kiss will transfer part
of his soul to yours, making you soulmates...and giving you an
eternal soul.” She frowned, pushing back her long, heavy auburn
waves. “If he marries another, or fails to kiss you by the last
rays of twilight on the final day, you'll become sea foam on the
waves. You'll never be able to return to the sea. You won't be seeing
your family and friends or Jeff or me ever again.”
Betty only nodded again. “I understand.”
“I don't think you do.” Hilary took a coin on a long gold chain
off of a hook. “However, since you seem bound and determined to
ruin your life, I'm not going to stop you.” She sat Betty down in a
bed of seaweed. “I'm going to put you under a trance. The voice
removal and tail splitting can be excruciatingly painful. I don't
want you to back ou...to suffer more than you've already set yourself
up to.”
Betty sighed. “All right, Hilary.”
Jeff watched from the cauldron. “Hilary, what are you doing?”
“Jeffrey, quiet.” She swung the medallion in front of the younger
mermaid's wide, innocent eyes. “Now, watch the medallion, Betty.
Concentrate on it. Let it lull you into a sweet slumber. Don't think
about anything but the coin and the sound of my voice.”
Jeff watched as Betty's eyes glazed over and became murky. Her
pretty, slender face was placid and gentle. Her lids lowered, then
closed all together, and her breathing slowed.
“Jeffrey, hand me the knife. The one with the pearl handle.”
He did as he was bid. “Is she all right?”
“Yes, dear. She's just under hypnosis.” She took the knife from
him and cut off Betty's floor-length reddish-brown curls, cropping
them close to her chin. She dropped the long ropes of hair into the
cauldron.
Jeff looked sadly at his sister's now-short locks. “Did you really
need that much, Hilary?”
“It's part of the potion.” She shrugged. “Besides, I think she
looks much better that way. Here.” She handed him a knife. “You
get a scale. Be careful. Don't hit her skin. I don't want blood, just
a scale.”
“She's my sister, Hilary. I may think she's off her seashell for
wanting to do this, but I do love her.” He gently pried a scale
from close to the bottom of Betty's red-gold tail, making sure he
didn't push too hard.
“Here.” Hilary dropped the scale in the cauldron, then handed
Jeff a long-handled spoon. “Keep stirring this. I'll get her
voice.”
“Hilary,” Jeff started to protest, “why can't you leave her
voice alone? She wants so badly to talk to this human of hers.”
“She agreed to it.” Hilary took a long-necked green glass bottle
from a shelf. “Now, dear girl,” she said as she went to Betty,
“tilt your head back, close your eyes, and open your mouth for me.
Let the magic pull your voice free of your throat. It's no longer
yours.”
As Betty opened her mouth, Hilary put the bottle close to the younger
mermaid's lips. A green light flowed from Betty's throat into the
bottle. Even under a trance, Betty winced in pain. Her throat was on
fire. She could barely swallow, and she couldn't feel her tongue at
all.
The moment the light stopped flowing, Hilary put a piece of quartz
into the stopper. “There. I believe that's all of it.” She put
the bottle on a shelf. “Now, speak to me.”
Betty opened her little red mouth, but not a sound emerged. She tried
again, but she remained silent.
“Good.” She dipped another green glass bottle into the thick
black liquid in the cauldron. “I want you to swim to land and drink
this potion. When you awaken, you will be out of the trance, and your
tail will be legs. You will not only remember all that happened here,
but that your movements will be lovely and graceful, but also
painful.” She handed Betty the bottle. “Go. You have two weeks.”
Betty nodded and swam away, clutching the potion between her small,
delicate fingers.
Jeff turned on his wife with an anger he'd never felt before, even
during one of their periodic quarrels. “Hilary Booth, how could you
let her do that? Why didn't you make her listen? Not only is she
going to be one of those...those land monsters, but if she doesn't
get some human she saw once to fall for her, she'll lose her life!
She doesn't deserve that!” He groaned. “And how will I tell the
rest of the family? Father will kill me!”
“She wanted it, Jeff. I did try to talk her out of it.” She
smiled and patted her husband's rear tail. “Why don't you go home
and prepare a fish souffle for us? I could use a nice meal after a
hard day of helping poor unfortunate merfolk.”
“Hilary....”
“You move along.” She almost shoved Jeff out of the grotto. “I'll
be ready and willing to join you on our bed when you get home. A
night of....love...sounds like fun.”
The moment Jeff was out of sight of the grotto, Hilary went to the
shelf with her potions. She took down the green glass jar with
Betty's voice. “I'm sorry, dear girl, but this is the only way to
get what I want.”
Hilary Booth had a secret. For all her success with every other form
of entertainment, she'd never been as good of a singer as most
merfolk actresses were. She watched them enchant audiences with their
amazing voices and stunning songs, while she merely recited words
etched onto dried seaweed paper. Princess Betty's request had given
her one last chance to restore her former glory.
She pulled out the quartz and drained every last bit of her
sister-in-law's voice from the jar. She started to sing...and was
delighted to hear beautiful music pouring forth. “Maybe it is
wrong,” she muttered to herself, “and maybe Jeffrey will have my
head. It's worth it. My sweet, silly sister's loss is my gain.”
While Hilary was rehearsing with her voice, Betty swam to the patch
of coastline where she'd taken Scott after the storm. The first light
of the day spilled on Betty as she dragged herself onto the soft
yellow sand. She pulled the stopper off the jar and drank it deeply.
That was the last thing she remembered. The moment the potion went
down her throat, there was a sudden stabbing pain in the center of
her tail. It felt as if it were being cleft in two. The pain below
her torso was so unbearable that she blacked out.
“Miss?” Everything was blurry at first when she finally awoke.
All she could make out at first was black and pale peach. Gradually,
she found herself staring into the warm, comforting eyes of her
beloved Scott.
“Are you all right?” She was laying on his surprisingly
comfortable lap. Maple, the pretty red-headed lady with the odd
voice, knelt next to him. Scott wore a plain white cover on his upper
half and gray over his legs. Maple was mostly covered by masses of
pale blue and white fluff and frills. A wide-brimmed yellow circle
with blue flowers around the crown shaded her soft, pale skin.
“Poor kid.” Maple was rubbing her hand. “You ok, honey?”
Betty opened her mouth to tell them. The tearing pain in her throat
reminded her that she had no way to explain what she was doing there.
She settled for shaking her head “no” instead.
“Aw, poor girl.” Maple rubbed her back. “Whatever washed her up
here scared her so much, she can't talk.”
“Maybe you'll feel better if we get you into some nice, fresh
clothes.” Scott turned red in the face. “We found you, er, naked
except for some sea flowers.” As Betty looked around, she realized
she was covered in a soft rectangle that was made from many colors
and patterns. “Good thing we were on a picnic and had that old
quilt with us. Someone might think you're startin' a nudist colony.”
“Let's get you home.” Maple and Scott put their arms around
Betty's shoulders. “Do you think you can walk, hon? Scotty lives
just beyond the dunes over there.” Maple pointed to a series of
wooden boxes with triangular tops that looked like non-floating
ships. “His house is closer n' mine. I live in town.”
Betty started to stand...but the moment she got to her newly-created
feet, she almost collapsed. Hilary was right. Just moving hurt more
than she could have ever imagined. Heavy pain shot up her legs. Her
throat and torso felt like they were hotter than boiling water.
“Whoa!” Scott caught her and scooped her and the quilt into his
strong arms. “Looks like you don't have your land legs yet, miss.
I'll get you home. And don't you worry. I'll be a perfect gentleman.”
“Yeah, or else.” Maple grinned. “I'll keep an eye on him an'
make sure his hands don't go anywhere they shouldn't be.”
Betty didn't hear them. She was just happy leaning into Scott's
broad, warm, safe chest. Now, surely she could show him how much she
cared about him, and how she had saved his life.
************
Mackie was horrified when Jeff told him what happened. “How could
you let her do it? My oldest daughter, among those...those
fish-snatchers!”
“Father, she was bound and determined to get up to the surface.
Hilary and I told her she was crazy. She wouldn't listen. She wants
to see the land and get that human to love her.”
“But she only saw the guy one day!” Mackie was swimming up and
down, waving his hands around. “Isn't there something we can do?”
“I asked Hilary that later, after we....” Jeff coughed. “Well,
I asked her that last night. She said no, there's no way to reverse
the spell. What's done is done. The only way to change it is for
Betty to get the human to give her part of his soul and make her his
soulmate.”
“Isn't there anyone else we could get who could change the spell?”
Mackie went to his son. “There's lots of other witches in the sea
besides your wife.”
Jeff frowned. “We could try. We'd just have to be careful. Some of
those dark witches are truly ruthless. They want a lot more than a
pretty voice.”
“Can we help?” Doug came over with C.J and Enid. “Betty's our
sister, too.”
Enid nodded. “That's right. We wish for her to return safely to our
arms as much as you do.”
Jeff gulped. “I know of another witch who might be able to help us,
Father. Her name is Ruth. She worked with Hilary, briefly, several
years ago.”
Mackie shook his head. “No, I can't let you go to her. I heard
rumors she practices dark magic – a lot darker than Hilary's.
She'll end up turning you all into sea cucumbers!”
“She's also one of the strongest witches in the ocean.” Doug
frowned. “I don't think we have much of a choice. She may be the
only one who can counter Hilary's spell.”
“No!” Mackie shook his head. “I can't let you do it. Not even
to save Betty. I don't want to lose all of my children! I forbid you
going anywhere near that witch! And that's final!” He swam out in a
frustrated huff.
Enid wrung her hands. “Oh brothers, what should we do? I don't wish
for Betty to remain above the waters any longer than is absolutely
necessary. I'm terribly frightened for her.”
“So am I.” Jeff started out the grotto. “Which is why I'm going
to see Ruth. I don't care what Father says. There has to be a way to
bring Betty home without making more sacrifices.”
“I'm going with you.” Doug swam right up to him. “I've studied
the law of the seas. It might help to have someone who knows how they
work on your side.”
“That means us, too.” C.J was on Doug's other side, Enid right
behind him. “Do you think you're going to leave Enid and me out,
just because we're a little younger than the rest of you?”
“I've never gazed upon a real dark magic sea witch before, besides
Hilary,” Enid added. “This will be an extremely edifying
experience.”
“Or a frightening one.” Jeff sighed. “Let's go.”
The Little Mer-Betty, Part 3
Lady Ruth Geddy was a very elegant and very popular merfolk actress.
She was also a witch – the possessor of some of the darkest magic
in the entire Atlantic. She lived in a beautiful, expensive grotto
made of black crystal on the end of a wealthy street in a fashionable
part of the ocean. Her glistening royal blue scales were always
bedecked with fine crystals and precious sea-stones. No one knew
where her army of loyal slaves came from. They were shriveled,
mindless creatures covered in ragged seaweed that obeyed no one but
her.
Hilary hated Lady Ruth. When Ruth was an up-and-coming star and
Hilary was one of the most popular performers in the mid-Atlantic,
Hilary had gotten a role Ruth badly wanted. She sabotaged
Hilary...then reminded the producers that she could sing, and Hilary
couldn't.
Jeff and his three younger siblings swam through the grotto, passing
strange flowers that closed when they came near and dried-out arms
that grabbed at them. Enid screamed when one reached for her with
long, shriveled fingers. Doug managed to untangle her tail and pull
her away.
Enid shivered. “I'm not at all certain I consider this to be a good
idea now. What were those...those things...we passed?”
“No one knows, Enid.” Doug gulped. “I have the feeling we're
better off not knowing.”
One of the creatures stopped Jeff at the main room of the grotto. “Is
Lady Geddy in, uh, sir?” he asked, trying not to look at the
withered creature.
It nodded and lead them through a series of corridors. Lady Ruth's
grotto was, indeed, a thing of wicked beauty. It was almost as large
as their own grotto, decorated in black and dark blue crystal.
Seaweed-papers detailing her career and drawings of her many
performances could be seen on every surface.
They were brought into the largest antechamber, a huge cave with a
vaulted ceiling made entirely of sparking blue and purple crystals.
Ruth was turned to a cauldron that was much larger and newer than
Hilary's. She was a small merwoman with full red lips and wide dark
eyes. Her thick, straight auburn hair waved around her shoulders. She
wore a fish-scale wrap that was all the rage among society merwomen
that season.
Jeff didn't like the look on her face. Her brown eyes were cold as
the ice that crusted the Atlantic in the winter. The expression on
her round, pink face was that of pure arrogance. Even his beloved
Hilary never looked that spoiled...or that cruel.
She gave them a small smile, almost a smirk, when she turned to the
four. “My goodness. King MacKinley's brood certainly has grown up
lately. You've all gotten so long since I was last at the palace.”
She looked around. “But there's one of you missing. The oldest
mergirl, I believe?”
“Ruth,” Jeff started, “our sister Betty made a deal with my
wife to go to the surface and get an immortal soul.”
“She did?” Ruth got closer to him. She played with the brown
curls that spilled over his shoulders. “I can't say I blame her.
I'd love to have an immortal soul. If I had a soul, why I could
conquer land with my voice, and get even more applause there than I
already do here.”
“Isn't it enough that you're one of the most famous of all
performers under the Atlantic?” Enid pointed out timidly.
“Of course it isn't, little mermaid. It's never enough.” She
turned to her cauldron. “What kind of deal did your sweet sister
make?”
Jeff frowned. “She gave Hilary her voice, her hair, and a scale
from her tail to make a potion that changed her tail into legs. She
only has two weeks to get this man to love her, Ruth! If he doesn't,
she'll die! We'll lose our sister!”
Ruth put up a hand. “Calm down, fair merman. I can help your
sibling. I think I can even guess what spell Hilary used.” She took
down a heavy book, very similar to the one on Hilary's shelf, and ran
a finger down a page. “Ahh, here it is. The antidote. This will
restore the Princess's mermaid form, whether or not her human has
agreed to marry her. It is, however, more complicated to assemble
than the transformation potion. I'll need many ingredients, some of
them spread across hundreds of miles.”
“We'll do it.” Jeff drew himself up to his full height before
her. “We'll do whatever it takes to get our sister back to normal.”
She picked up a sharp fish scale quill and scratched off words
quickly, then threw the list into Jeff's arms. “Here. This is
everything you'll need to assemble the potion. I do have some of the
items here, but many of them can only be found in caves or grottoes
in the deep parts of the ocean. A person of my finer qualities
wouldn't fit there. Besides, I do have my concert schedule to keep up
with.”
Doug glared at her. “This had better be on the level. I know the
rules for this sort of thing. If we do all this work for you, you
have to give something to us.”
“You'll have a potion, of course, and your sister.” She turned on
him angrily. “Don't question me, lawyer. You're the one who came to
me. All I need from you are scales, stones, sand, and cold water from
the very bottom of the sea. This is nothing that difficult.”
Jeff's fists were clenched in anger. “So help me, Ruth, if you
hurt any of my family, including Hilary and my father and
grandmother, I'll...”
“You'll do what you're told.” She shooed them off with the list.
“Go! I need all of these things within two weeks. Then, you'll have
your precious sister back.”
She watched the quartet swim off with their list. “Those foolish
children.” She turned to one of her dried slaves. “They think I
actually care about that silly sister of theirs. I have no use for
her, except for as a slave.” She paged through the book. “I
really want to get on land. Oh, I can turn my tail into legs any time
I wish. I have the potion for that. It's a matter of staying there
and not becoming sea foam after a week or so, not to mention get
around the constant pain. For that, I need a human soul. A good,
strong one, one that will allow me to continue on for a very, very
long time.”
She smirked. “I'm going to go for a swim up to the land. I haven't
been there in a while. Perhaps I'll see a soul there worthy of being
in my beautiful body.”
Betty had never felt so pampered and petted in her whole life. Scott
had carried her across the sands, to one of the largest of the boxes
made from driftwood. A plump female in a simple blue-striped wrap,
her hair pulled back in a bun, met him at the entrance.
“My goodness, Mr. Sherwood! Who's this pretty girl?” Betty liked
the female right away. She had a sweet, cheery voice and a gentle,
round face that looked like the moon over the waters at night. “What
happened to her? Where are her clothes?”
“We don't know. She can't talk. I think she's just scared. She
probably washed up from a capsized schooner or something.” Betty
clung to Scott as he went through the entrance. She'd never seen
anything like this grotto. It was filled with strange objects, golden
squares with pictures of humans and animals and places, a huge hunk
of driftwood with little white and black rectangles lined up in rows,
a big fat bass hung on a one wall, old netting and dried starfish and
crabs decorating another. A huge old crab trap and a thick piece of
driftwood stood in front of soft sea-blue chairs and couches.
“You poor thing!” Scott finally set her down. She wobbled,
wincing in pain and falling back into his arms. Eugenia took her
other arm. “You must have broken something. Why don't we give you a
good, warm bath, then see if we can get you some clothes. I'm afraid
I don't have anything that'll remotely fit you.”
“We'll take her shoppin' tomorrow.” Maple put an arm around her.
“For now, I'll loan her a blouse and skirt. She'll need underthings
that are tailored to fit her. Her bosom is a lot smaller than mine n'
yours, Eugenia.”
Eugenia pushed Scott towards the kitchen as Maple lead Betty to
another room. “Mr. Sherwood, why don't you go check on the clam
chowder and make sure it's not boiling over? And if you eat it now,
you won't be getting any blackberry pie with fresh cream for
dessert!”
Scott crossed his fingers in front of his chest. “Cross m' heart,
Eugenia. I'm no snitch.” He patted Betty's arm, then headed towards
the back of the box.
Betty was lead to a small room in the back of the house. Maple and
Eugenia helped her into a white basin made of a rock-like material.
They filled it with water that didn't taste of salt, then added a
liquid that smelled like roses and created the most wonderful
bubbles! Eugenia laughed as Betty blew them around, giggling when
they tickled her nose.
“You're such a beauty,” Eugenia said as she picked up a long
brush and scrubbed Betty's back with it. “I wonder where you came
from?”
Betty showed her the pearl around her neck. “Yes, that's a
beautiful pearl. It looks like a real raw pearl from the sea.”
Betty nodded hard at the last word. “I know you came from the sea,
miss. That's where Mr. Sherwood found you. But we're going to have to
find your real home sooner or later.”
But that is my
real home...or it was. Betty
finally just let Eugenia rub all over her body with a soft cloth.
Eugenia was just helping her out of the basin when Maple came in,
carrying something pale and flowing over her arms.
“Well, she's looking a little better. Not so much like a drowned
puppy.” The tall red-head frowned and tugged at Betty's hacked-off
curls. “No offense, sister, but who did your hair? Looks like
someone took a knife to your head.” Betty nodded. “They ought to
be horsewhipped. You have nice hair. It deserves better n' this.”
She pulled a strange metal object from a drawer in the shelves across
from the basin that looked like two small knives fused together.
“We'll have to fix that. Good thing I used to do my brothers' an'
sisters' hair when they were kids.”
Maple sat Betty down on a soft little chair with no sides. She
trimmed the ragged edges off, trying to even them out. “There,”
she said after a few minutes. “Much better. It'll probably look
even nicer when it dries.”
“Miss Maple, could you get her dressed?” Eugenia nodded at the
door. “I have to check in on the clam chowder and slice the bread
and cheese, before Mr. Sherwood and Mr. Foley eat them all.”
“Sure, Eugenia.” She helped Betty to her feet. “Come on. Let's
see what we can do with this outfit.”
Betty couldn't believe how complicated human scales were! There were
so many things to hook and thread and tie. Maple did up her white
wrap, which she wore above her torso. There was lots of fluff around
her neck and chest, just like on Maple's wrap. It was too long and
too wide in the bosom; Maple had to pull it down to keep it from
sticking out. Her legs were covered by a pale blue wrap that flowed
around them like seawater. Her new red-haired friend had to wrap a
piece of thick leather around her waist to get the too-big wrap to
stay put.
“There.” She sighed. “My feet are bigger n' yours. You're
probably not gonna go anywhere else tonight, anyway. You can go
barefoot until we can borrow some shoes from Eugenia.”
Scott and a smaller man with a thin mustache were setting the table
when Maple brought Betty out. Her now-chin-length curls were tied
back from her face with a soft blue piece of wrap. “Wow.” Scott
went to her, turning her around. “Is this the same skinny,
half-drowned sea urchin we found at the beach?” Betty bristled at
being called “skinny,” but his eyes were twinkling. “You look
gorgeous, miss. Like every Charles Gibson model rolled into one.”
“You know,” Eugenia said as they sat down on hard chairs made of
driftwood, “we can't keep calling her 'miss.' She needs a name of
some kind.”
Betty frowned. She had a name, a perfectly good one. Her eyes lit up,
and she darted into the living room. Scott and the smaller man
exchanged amused looks as she came back with a book. She pointed to
the cover.
Scott read where her finger was pointing. “History of England,
Elizabethan Era.” He looked up at her. “Your name is Elizabeth?”
She nodded, smiling. “What's your last name?” Betty's face fell.
She didn't know what he meant by “last” names. Merfolk only had
one name! He sighed. “You know, we'll figure that one out tomorrow.
From the look on your face, you may not even remember.”
“I'll bet you have amnesia, like in the old romances.” Eugenia
was putting small bowls of a white liquid in front of them, along
with a plate of bright green sticks and red circles. A long crusty
white sponge sat in the middle of the table. Eugenia cut slices from
it, then spread it with a thick yellow substance.
The little man smiled as he passed her some sponge slices. “This is
Mr. Foley,” Eugenia started before the little fellow could open his
mouth. “He's our gardener and handyman. Does just about everything
that needs to be done around here.” Mr. Foley opened his mouth to
talk again, even as he ate a second slice of bread, but Eugenia shook
a finger in his face. “It's not polite to talk with your mouth
full, Foley.”
Betty sniffed at the liquid. It smelled absolutely delicious! She
started to pick up the bowl with her fingers, the way they did at
home...then realized everyone else at the table was staring at her.
She put the bowl down, a red hot flame spreading across her cheeks.
Scott smiled and took her hand. “Here.” He put a long, silvery
stick with a small basin on the end into her hand. “Around here, we
usually use these for eating soup.” She watched her dinner
companions eat, trying to get the hang of it. They stared at her when
she slurped. She couldn't help it! She never ate from a basin like
this before.
She had an even harder time with the tiny trident that was used to
eat the red circles and green sticks. She couldn't get the food to
stay on the tines. She sighed, annoyed. She felt the flame on her
cheeks again when Scott helped her hold the trident properly.
After dinner was lovely. Eugenia took the dishes to another room to
be cleaned, while Betty, Maple, and the two men went out to the shady
place in the front of the grotto Scott called “the porch.” Mr.
Foley played a song on a stringed instrument, and he, Maple, and
Scott sang along. I wish I could sing along, too, thought
Betty sadly. I used to love singing with Father and Grandmother
and my brothers and sisters.
“Are you ok, Elizabeth?” Scott gave her his lopsided smile.
“Missing your family?”
She nodded sadly. She wanted to tell him so badly how much she missed
them. She wanted them to be a part of this world...and him to be a
part of hers. She was surprised when she felt salty water running
down her cheeks, flowing across her chin and dripping onto her white
wrap. She rubbed violently at her smarting eyes.
“Tears?” Scott gently wiped the water away. “Aw, don't cry,
Liz. You're too pretty to cry. We'll get you back to your family. I
promise.”
She made a face at the “Liz.” She hated being called that. “Ok,
you don't like Liz. Lizzie? Beth? Betty?” She nodded at the last
one with a grin of her own. “You're now Betty, then.”
Maple put an arm around her. “How'd you like to see the town with
me tomorrow, Betty? We could go shopping and even take in one of
those moving picture shows at the theater that just opened.”
“I'm afraid I'll have to miss out on the shopping,” Scott
admitted. “I have to meet the crew down at the docks and see what
we can do about salvaging the ship. How about I meet the two most
beautiful women at the new restaurant at Brant Point for lunch?”
Betty nodded. She didn't know what a “restaurant” was. It sounded
fascinating. Maple agreed. “Yeah. We'll do lunch, then go see the
picture show, then do the beach. It'll be a great day!”
The Little Mer-Betty, Part 4
The next day was one of the loveliest Betty had ever known. She never
witnessed so many amazing sights before.There was a shell-carriage that went without any seahorses.
Everyone stared at them as Maple hollered at people to get off the
road and watch where you're goin', buster! Funny white creatures that
flustered and cackled fled as they flew past.
“Town” was a series of the wooden box grottoes, each containing a
different place to purchase supplies. There was a grocer who sold
fruits and vegetables. A butcher sold meat; a fishmonger sold fish
and clams and oysters. There was a place to buy books, and a place to
buy pretty trinkets that looked like the items her family had
salvaged from sunken ships.
They spent most of their time in two shops adjoining one another. One
sold long, rolls of scales Maple called “fabric.” They were so
soft and colorful! She'd never seen so many kinds of scales. Another
sold more wraps like the ones Maple and Eugenia wore. Maple explained
that they were called “blouses” and “dresses” and “skirts.”
Betty had no idea that dressing like the humans was so hard! Maple
had to show her how to button her dress and her white and black
shoes. There were stretchy wraps that went around her legs called
“stockings,” and things called “garters” that held them in
place. She laughed at the mere idea of the bony thing Maple called a
“corset” and refused to wear it. Maple finally agreed. “You're
so small, you probably don't need it anyway,” she said as she
helped button her new dress up the back.
By the time they met Scott for lunch, Betty felt more like a real
female human. Even Maple said the result was “really gorgeous, like
a paintin'.” Betty admired herself in the heavy pieces of glass
humans called a mirror. She wore a soft pink dress with lots of the
fluff Maple called “ruffles and lace.” The thing on her head that
Maple called a “hat” was laden with a pink ribbon and the flowers
Maple called “roses.” Even Maple bought herself a new dress with
yellowish flowers and a new hat, this one trimmed with yellow and
white flowers she called “daisies.”
They took the car across the green land to “Brant Point,” which
turned out to be more like a cliff. Scott did indeed meet them at a
long box surrounded by chairs and tables. It was more weathered than
the boxes in town, and closer to the water. Betty could smell the
same cooking clams that permeated Scott's box back at the beach.
“Wow.” Scott's eyes were wide. He took Betty's hand and kissed
it. “You look incredible. It's like you're a whole different
person.” He grinned at Maple. “And you look pretty cute too,
Mapes.”
Maple gave him a little shove on the arm. “Aw, go on.”
“No, really. You're the most beautiful girls in all of Nantucket.”
He took their arms. “Would the most beautiful women in Nantucket
like to go to lunch with the most handsome man?”
“Sure!” Maple grinned. “Where is he?” Betty couldn't help her
own smile at Scott's fallen expression. Maple finally patted his arm.
“Aw, come on, Scotty. I'm so hungry, I could eat three lobster.”
“Well, thanks to losing my cargo, I don't quite have the money for
that.” He smiled as he lead them to a table. “I hope clams casino
and fried scallops with bacon will work just as well.”
The lunch was delicious! Betty'd never tasted anything that had been
“fried” before. “Fried” turned out to mean a bit greasy and
covered in crunchy nuggets. It melted on her tongue. The salad of
lettuces, round red slices called “tomatoes,” and herbs was
excellent, too. It was doused in a liquid Maple called “dressing.”
It was tangy and greasy and very salty.
The picture show in town was even more incredible. By “picture
show,” Maple meant “moving pictures.” Betty never heard of
pictures that moved. They sat in a small box and watched black and
white pictures on a large white fabric square. She saw huge rolling
vehicles go back and forth, a woman and a man kiss, a woman in long,
flowing wraps dance, and a group of men steal money from a rolling
carriage. She never dreamed she'd see anything like this. The last
show was so life-like, Betty found herself grabbing at Scott when the
guns were seen on the screen. Scott smiled gently at her and kissed
the top of her forehead.
They finished the day at the beach in front of Scott's box. The sun
was going down as they brought a basket of sandwiches and fruit and
the quilt with them. Maple and Betty stripped off their stockings and
shoes, and Scott did likewise. They laughed as they chased each other
and built a grotto made of sand, sticks, and stones.
Maple went back to the house briefly to get something to drink. Betty
finally leaned against Scott, tired but very happy. He smiled down at
her. “Had a nice day, Betty?” She nodded, sighing. “I'm glad.
You know...there's something familiar about you. I swear I've seen
you before. You look like someone...someone who saved my life,
once....but she had longer hair, and the most beautiful voice I ever
heard. It was like a nightingale's.” Betty groaned inwardly. If
only she could tell him! She settled for leaning on his shoulder
instead. “I didn't really see much of her. I wish I had. I'd hope
she was as pretty as you. You're such a sweet girl. I wish I
knew...where you came from....who you are...”
They were just about to kiss when they heard footsteps running down
to the quilt. “Hi there, you crazy kids!” Maple sat on Scott's
other side as they broke apart, blushing. She handed them jars of
brown liquid. “Here. Eugenia's own iced tea, steeped all day and
made with the finest lemons Scott brought home himself from Florida.”
She sipped her tea. “You know, Scotty's got a great story about
that trip to Florida. He told me about it the last time he was in
town.”
Betty's eyes lit up. She'd heard of the southern side of the
Atlantic, but she'd never been there. Scott grinned as he took the
jar. “Yeah, that was an interesting job. We were hauling citrus
fruit from Sarasota to Boston, and we ran into these smugglers who
thought we had real jewels, not jewel-colored fruit. So we painted a
box of strawberries to look like rubies...”
Maple and Betty weren't the only ones who were avidly listening to
Scott's tale. Had any of them happened to gaze out at the cove at
that moment, they would have noticed a diminutive white body covered
in a fish-scale wrap watching them with a great deal of interest.
“Hmm,” Ruth murmured to herself, “so this is the human Princess
Betty gave up her tail and her voice for. I can't say I blame her. He
is quite a looker. I'll bet his soul is amazing, if his stories are
anything to go by. Why should a silly mermaid get such a prize? I
would make a far better soul mate for this charming creature.”
The next two weeks were the most enjoyable Betty had ever spent. She
chased Maple around the beach in the morning, then explored the town
with Scott. They went for a boat ride on a small ship Scott borrowed
from a friend, and Scott taught her how to fish with something he
called a rod and reel. Maple took her to the town library, which was
filled with books in every size, shape, and description. Betty spent
hours there, reading every book she could get her hands on. They went
to the picture show again, this time to see a romance about two
families who kept a pair of lovers apart. They went to lunch at a
little box Maple called a “soda fountain.” It was really a long
marble counter with iron chairs, where they ordered something called
“ice cream.” Betty's vanilla was smooth and creamy and delicious.
She'd never tasted anything like it.
Her favorite part of the day was after dinner, when it was just her,
Scott, and Maple. Scott would play music on the long driftwood
rectangle in the parlor, which he called a piano. He even showed her
how to play some simple songs. She'd dance with Maple, and then
alone. Maple would take over the piano, and she'd dance with Scott.
When she swung around the living room with him, she forgot her sore
feet and that she was living on borrowed time. All she thought about
was him and how happy she was.
There was only one thing that truly put a damper on her wonderful two
weeks. She really missed her family. She missed hearing their
singing, their laughter, and her grandmother's stories. She wished
she could talk to them just one more time and tell them about the
wonderful things she'd seen! If only they could be a part of her new
home, or Scott and Maple could be a part of theirs!
Meanwhile, Ruth Getty was making her own plans. She'd gone to listen
to Hilary Booth perform in concert about a week after Betty went to
the surface. Unlike most of the audience, she wasn't surprised to
hear a familiar voice come from Hilary's throat. The concert was a
sell-out. Every merman and woman wanted to hear this amazing voice
that Hilary had previously kept hidden.
Ruth met Hilary in the back of the theater after the show, much to
the latter's dismay. “Why, Hilary Booth,” Ruth purred, “I
didn't know you had such a magnificent singing voice. You have real
talent. Why didn't you tell me during that one show you graciously
allowed me to take over?”
“I didn't graciously allow you!” Hilary snapped. “You sabotaged
my performance, with your little notes that said things like
'iceberg' and 'sink like a rock.' I wouldn't have talked to you after
that for all the pearls in all the oysters in the entire Atlanic
Ocean!”
Ruth took Hilary's hand in hers. “But you sound so wonderful here!
I was wr...w....” She sighed. “Well, I should have known someone
as beautiful and...seasoned....as you would have a voice to match.”
One side of her lips went up in a sneer. “Although, there is
something...unusual....about your singing voice.”
Hilary did not like that sneer. “What do you mean by 'unusual?'”
“It's lovely, really, but it's much too high. It's doesn't match
your speaking voice at all.” The sneer widened. “It's not yours,
is it?”
“Of course it is! Where do you think it came from?”
“Your sister-in-law.” Hilary opened her mouth, but Ruth waved a
hand in front of it. “You'll tell me the truth, Hilary. It's not
your voice, is it? You stole it from your husband's sister, Princess
Elizabeth. The one who's been missing this past week.”
“I don't know anything about it!”
Ruth patted her flowing auburn locks into shape. “Oh, but I think
you do. Your husband and his siblings told me all about how you cut
her hair and took her beautiful voice for yourself.”
“She came to me!” Hilary protested. “I tried to
stop her! I told her how painful turning a tail into legs is. Jeff
tried to talk her out of it. She was in love with some human she
rescued from the storm a few weeks ago. I had to have some payment
for such a strong potion.”
The smaller merwoman patted Hilary's cheek. “You know, you and your
spectacular voice could be useful to me now.”
Hilary shoved her hand away. “Do you really think I'd do anything
for you, after you stole my career from me? You told anyone who would
listen that I couldn't sing and wasn't worthy of the better roles.
You know how important singing is to us merfolk.”
“It's important on land, too.” Ruth sighed. “I'm bored with
these ridiculous, fawning merfolk. I want a new venue to conquer, new
music to sing, new slaves with energy to take. I want to get on on
land.”
“But you know we can't stay there longer than a few weeks at the
most! We can't survive up there!”
“You can't.” Ruth swished her scale wrap across Hilary's face. “I
can. I have the same book as you. I can make myself a potion that
will give me legs...and win myself a handsome human.”
“Not you, too! It's bad enough Betty's chasing after some
fish-catcher!”
Ruth smirked. “Hilary, have you seen that human Princess Elizabeth
has her eye on? As all the little mermaids would say, he's quite a
catch.” She inspected herself in a piece of sea-glass. “He'd be a
fine addition to my collection, once I got my hands on his immortal
soul.”
“No!” Hilary pulled back. “Not only am I not going to help you,
but I have every intention of telling my father-in-law King McKinley
what you're up to. He's been beside himself with worry this past
week.”
“You do that,” purred Ruth, “and I'll tell him who gave his
daughter the potion in the first place, and what happened to her
voice.”
Hilary clenched her fists. “You wouldn't dare!”
“Would I?” She turned back to Hilary. “You don't seem to quite
understand your position, Miss Hilary Booth. You're the one who has
his daughter's voice. I'm just a simple merwoman who wants to become
the greatest star anywhere.” She moved around Hilary. “You know,
your husband has a very warm, pleasant voice. If I were to take
it...and maybe give him some long legs to go with that torso...”
The dark-haired merwoman witch growled. “Don't you even contemplate
putting your rotten little tail on my Jeffrey!”
“Then you'll do exactly what I tell you to.” She nodded above
them. “I need you to use that lovely voice that isn't yours to lure
your sister-in-law's fair human male away from her and into my arms.”
“But she'll die if she doesn't marry him!” Hilary groaned. “And
if she dies, I have the feeling I won't be living long, either.”
Ruth tugged at one wayward lock of brown hair. “Do you think I care
about some little mermaid? It's my career I'm thinking of.” She
patted Hilary's chest...hard. “I'll let you consider it. Come back
to me in a week.” Hilary was still sputtering when Ruth swam off.
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